Flame for the Future

Two sides of the same coin

Strike a match
Let it burn
The flames engulf every stop and turn
The thunderous fire
Our burning desire
Consuming everything in its path

Let us rejoice
The dancing flames
As it envelopes us in its cosy warmth
The shining embers
Within the ashes
Leading to a brighter path

Author's Note

Feel free to review :)

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' Let us rejoice ~ The dancing flames ' Yes, yes and yes again!

Everything that flames the meanings of Life and feeling alive is a bonus in day-to-day being. There's more than one way of converting one's own plans to suit our individual spot on Earth: remember, always, that excess kills whereas 'easy does it' protects. Fine writing, genuine.. and more.

[Elizabeth]

Thabk you so much for your review.
Your kind words really make me very happy

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the way your poem took a turn in the end. All the fire in your heart showed a path in the end. Creatively done. I liked it.

[Elizabeth]

thank you so much for your review:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are welcome :)

[barleygirl]

Your poem is a very creative way of saying our world is kinda messed up & instead of waiting for an answer or complaining, we all need to do exactly as you're saying in this uplifting message. This mess is so big, we all need to be part of the solution. Even when the tragedy feels too huge, every little ray of light is important. Especially as writers, we can shine a light. I love the way your poem could apply to healing or creativity or passion or anything done with a fire in one's belly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Elizabeth]

Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it :)

[Chris Shaw]

There is always something magical to me about watching a flame dance. Whether a match burning or a warm and cosy fire, it always has the same uplifting effect. Nicely worded lines.

Chris

[Elizabeth]

Thank you for your review :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Flames ( knowledge, realisation) consuming everything in its path,and leading to a brighter passage is very uplifting concept. vigor and enthusiasm is all we need to make new beginnings. Well done.

[Elizabeth]

Thank you for your review :)

[Mrudula Rani]

You are most welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

very clever theme ..fire can be a light in the dark and it can burn everything down ...i like the brevity ... and the depth of thought i see ... and i'm thinking about that this morning ... will take it with me
E.

[Elizabeth]

Thank you so much for your kind words:)

[lightsong]

You've written it smartly and wonderfully, I felt Your hard work through these lines, Your idea and imagination are amazing, the best about this piece that it can be about love or life, anything... just to rise up from the despair and light the ashes into a fire's hope, very well done my friend!

[Elizabeth]

Thank you so much for your review!
Your words give me motivation to keep writing :)

[lightsong]

You should my friend ;)

[Elizabeth]

It's an overdone concept.... But I decided to try my hand at it... Constructive criticism is much appreciated :)

[lightsong]

it's not an overdone concept my friend, in poetry there is not such a thing, it's Your mind going far, Your imagination going wide... and in poetry THIS is amazing, well done again my friend.

[Elizabeth]

Thank you so much for your kind words... They keep me smiling all day:)