love

...im writing this for a contest...but i want to know what people think

love

a passion burning in my heart

every time we meet

whenever i see you

my heart lurches in my chest

i cant move

 

you immobilize my brain

i feel weightless as my body floats

you are my soul and you are my life

id give you my heart

but you stole it already

i dont want it back

 

we meet with a kiss

i fall into your arms and all my fear is gone

i never want this feeling to leave me

my heart beats with yours

we walk together, hand in hand

as we savor each moment together

 

nothing will ever change

time stops when we are together

nothing can break our love

the connection we share is a bond of souls

all we need is the love we share

love eternal

Author's Note

ignore the grammar and punctuation errors

Reviews

[Darkness Eternal]

ha......i totally made this up. ive never even been in love. i cant belive it turned out decent.

[Fallen Angel]

I really like your poem. I don't even know what else to say about it. It's really good and It's now in my favorites. :)