Using Me

Short Poem about being 'used'

 

Using me

Gave YOU pleasure

Using me

Gave YOU pride

Using me

Gave YOU honor

 

                      But gave me no justice.

Author's Note

I like this poem because you can really play with the words, and switch them around without loosing the main focus of the poem.

So if any of you have any ideas.. or know of any other good words I could add into here, I would LOVE to know!

Reviews

[Cats Eye]

Short yet to the point, some of the best of use of words i've seen yet

[Nobody]

I like poems that say alot with few words. I can certainly relate to this one!