XD wow! This is so spot on! I get the same feeling when I want to draw something- then remember that I don't know how to draw. u.u But it's worse with writing, because we know we CAN write... our hands just aren't cooperating. And then, when you're mentally reorganizing your thoughts you get lost in the confusion and it's all chaos from there.
I can so see this happening, like in a movie.
Great job!
Oh my goodness I totally identify with this feeling, it sucks when you can imagine, like in pictures almost, what you want on the page but you just can't translate it into words. I really like the way this poem is written, very easy to read (like it flows) Good job! :D
'Every thing I see I hope to Keen my wit' - I'm thinking hammer and anvil here...
neat - even the opening strikes ring out and then Bogus! - back in the fire...
interesting write this... a wordsmith craft worth honing though? Sparks flying, sweating...
This piece shows your personality, and I enjoyed it. This reminded me of how many times I've written about writers block only to believe they weren't actual pieces of writing. Makes me want to post one in particular from 2004. :) I find even when we try to write from our heart, our minds tend to get critical, and it's so hard to turn off. You expressed that really well here.
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The syntax found in this manuscript of S. D. Blankenship's poetry could retain to disordered and/or psychopathic. Comprehend and examine at your own exposed thoughts. A number of words mig.. more..