Happiness, Sadness, Hatred

This feeling I feel.

Its very hard for me to say it.

I’m in love with you.

Nothing but regret.

For all the things I have seen.

I’ll only blame me.

 

Forgiven or not.

It doesn’t matter to me.

Please don’t forgive me.

I’m always alone.

No one to care about me.

Better off alone.

Can’t help but feel sorry.

For everyone’s misfortunes.

I’m very sorry.

I’m hating myself.

For everything that happened.

Can’t forgive myself.

Passion is the game.

It’s very hard to handle.

Please help me through this.

I don’t know much now.

Maybe its because I’m weird.

Someone help me now.

People say weird things.

But doesn’t matter with me.

Go ahead and talk.

Enemies are here.

We all have to deal with it.

We can get through this.

Everyone has hate

It is hard to deal with it.

Someone help us please!

Christmas is the best.

It’s my favorite day of year.

Happy Holidays!!

Someone help me please!!!

Someone is out for my life!!!

Someone protect me!!!

The name of the game.

How should I describe this game.

The price of the game.

People have suffered

I, to have suffered a well

Suffering is bad.

I don’t care at all.

What people say about me.

Go ahead and say.

Winter break is here.

Finally time to relax.

Here I come Christmas.

School is hard to do.

Especially people like me

Why must I have this?

Brothers can be bad.

Considering you have two.

Sadly that is me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your life sound like my poor daughter. Poor girl must babysit daily her two sisters boys. Poor girl had little time for fun. I'm proud of her. She helped her sister. I told all my girls. Don't rush love. Try to find friendship and do some traveling before babies and bills come. I like the ending of the poem. Brother's can test the patience. Life isn't easy for no-one. Take a day at a time and hope for luck and happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[just is]

Oh wow! This is truly amazing, love the creativeness.
Awesome write.

[ATG]

A very interesting, but sad poem. It was well written and I did enjoy the changing colored text which is rare for me. Overall, a very good poem.

[Thea]

Wow...The emotions are well managed and expressed here...This could be a song, in my opinion! I like it a lot!
:)))

[MAC]

feels like lyrics. nicely done!

[Sujash I. Purna]

I loved the colourful fonts...however your subject was black and white...about happiness that is brightly white which slowly transmutes into sadness and hatred which is black...the words echo a turbulent mind's voice...this is a great work indeed..

[Brook Hughes]

very true:) well written and has a nice flow.. almost like a song:) Keep up the good work Becky:)