Devoted (Keepin` it Real)

Devoted (Keepin` it Real)

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu

Oh, I am on a hunt for a solid dream
And the excstacy from the realm
But a peaceful man is free of symbolic answer
I am free from jaws of hell
In a search for a holy grail
I burnt down every black sail
In 3a.m Devil sets his game
Tries to sell me an empty pleasure
But my soul baths in sea of treasure
I am completely uncorrupted
And ready to start gunnin`
I never stop demon huntin`

© 2015 Satoshi IroTzu


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Strong statements took the reader to solid goals. Hunting the Devil? Usually, the devil is hunting you. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it its really good

Posted 8 Years Ago


It sounds like you are a gamer on a quest.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Satoshi IroTzu

8 Years Ago

Interesting insight :)
Josie E. Cook M. A.

8 Years Ago

:) I hope I got your message correct~LOL!

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Added on October 19, 2015
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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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