Longing for Good Times

Longing for Good Times

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n2mvSpZgRZo

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Times slip pass the clutch of our hearts.
In depth of the ideal,
in the strongest flame of our desire,
we lose our minds,
abandon our reason.
Not to blame us so easily,
my detached friend
if you can feel our misery
it'd all be clear to you in The End.

© 2017 Satoshi IroTzu



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been away for a while and this is the first poem I have read, Wow! this is an incredible inspiring piece, short, yet deep rooted in expressiveness and allegory. Well done.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Satoshi IroTzu

3 Weeks Ago

Respect, Costa Siwale.

I appreciate your time and honesty in your comment.
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costa siwale

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, glad to be back.
will definitely read more of your work
"Time slipping pass the clutch of our hearts" very powerful and yes time is the only thing we often think about and how to control it. everything we go through or still more to go through, or everything we feel or memories printed in that certain moment it always like you said " Slips pass the clutch of our hearts" ... deep and meaningful. Continue to write. Sincerely your friend in poetry and life.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Satoshi IroTzu

4 Weeks Ago

Respect, Andrew Nelson Stewart.

I appreciate your time and honesty that you invested .. read more

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Added on October 22, 2017
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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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