Longing for Good Times

Longing for Good Times

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu
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Times slip pass the clutch of our hearts.
In depth of the ideal,
in the strongest flame of our desire,
we lose our minds,
abandon our reason.
Not to blame us so easily,
my detached friend
if you can feel our misery
it'd all be clear to you in The End.

© 2017 Satoshi IroTzu



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This piece is so true, and it's so powerful because every last line speaks the cold truth. Especially this line; "In the strongest flame of our desire, we lose our mind, abandon our reason". Reading that hit me hard because I know exactly how it feels to desire something so much that you lose all reasoning just to get it. Every word of this poem is filled with the clear view of someone who's been through something and I love it. It's wonderfully written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Satoshi IroTzu

6 Months Ago

Respect SweetWriter88.

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This piece is so true, and it's so powerful because every last line speaks the cold truth. Especially this line; "In the strongest flame of our desire, we lose our mind, abandon our reason". Reading that hit me hard because I know exactly how it feels to desire something so much that you lose all reasoning just to get it. Every word of this poem is filled with the clear view of someone who's been through something and I love it. It's wonderfully written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Satoshi IroTzu

6 Months Ago

Respect SweetWriter88.

I appreciate your honesty in your comment, and your time you i.. read more
been away for a while and this is the first poem I have read, Wow! this is an incredible inspiring piece, short, yet deep rooted in expressiveness and allegory. Well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Satoshi IroTzu

11 Months Ago

Respect, Costa Siwale.

I appreciate your time and honesty in your comment.
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costa siwale

10 Months Ago

Thank you, glad to be back.
will definitely read more of your work
"Time slipping pass the clutch of our hearts" very powerful and yes time is the only thing we often think about and how to control it. everything we go through or still more to go through, or everything we feel or memories printed in that certain moment it always like you said " Slips pass the clutch of our hearts" ... deep and meaningful. Continue to write. Sincerely your friend in poetry and life.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Satoshi IroTzu

11 Months Ago

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Added on October 22, 2017
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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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