The Few

Something I wrote to hang in my office (Seriously).

Weeks pass and time flows

What was new shall grow old

Never lost in time's folds

Are those that are ever bold

~*~

Among the adventurous few

Braving the dark and unknown

A certain and new point of view

Shall be revealed and known

~*~

Discoverers, changers of ways

They shall never fear or regret

The dark or the wolf's bay

Not until the last sun sets

~*~

Be they discoverers of land

Or leaders of men

They shall ever guide our hand

Into the lion's den

~*~

Many try to strike them down

To guide them from their way

But ever defiant and proud

For they shall not be led astray

~*~

They are those that know their fate

With their decision comes a price

But ever resolute shall they stay

For their goal is worth any fight

Reviews

[paparapapa]

This is great! I loved it. Keep on writing! ;)

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Very nicely done, love the rhyme scheme and flow.
Very poetic piece.

[Kaylor Mason]

The message of this poem should be shouted from the rooftops! This is splendid--I've been honored to know a few guys like this in my life--they're rare, but they're worth getting to know; you'll never regret their friendship

[Alicia Hirshey]

Crafty

[Michael X]

this is crafty and well written! it has an ultimate meaning which brings your words to life.

[Maryum Mazhar]

Nice flow.
different but awesome theme :)