Rise

Motivational poem.... i hope :p

 

Rise from the ashes

F**k social classes

Are you through being silent

Reach out to the masses

 

Dust off the rubble

Take off the muzzle

You find voice is important

Speak loud and let them see you are trouble

 

Think what is optional

Overcome all obstacles

No longer are we children

Anything we want is possible

Now it’s time for action

This is more than a reaction

Finished turning the other cheek

What rises is our faction

 

So Rise determination gives our soul flight

So Rise clenched fist with all our might

So Rise no chain can hold us down now

So Rise we are family our bonds are tight

 

Rise there is no way to fail

Rise so that we will prevail

Rise history holds only an echo

We are rising grab my hand come on let’s go

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Wow. I read it a few of times over and over because your style in rhyming is so addictive! This has lyrical quality.

Definitely motivating. I'm not a fan of the 'f' word or any word like it hahaha but it felt like no other word could really give the same power.

Goodness I think I just became a fan :D
I have seen nothing like your writing here so far. Don't stop.

[Thus Said Broken]

This is very good in a rebellious sort of way. I always like when people take a stand and be their own selves instead of following a crowd, and your writing reflects that philosophy. The rhyming is nice cause it isn't forced. Nice flow to it.

[karmic]

This poem is very strong and gives me a story like picture. Great job

[Katrina Mckeown]

Brilliantly done.....Where's your hand...lets go to it...Rise and make a stand! Very well written inspiring piece.

[mystic soul]

I like the rhythm in the poem... It's really very motivating and refreshing... keep writing.. :)