Rise

Rise

A Poem by Darruesh Eetraydes
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Motivational poem.... i hope :p

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Rise from the ashes
F**k social classes
Are you through being silent
Reach out to the masses
 
Dust off the rubble
Take off the muzzle
You find voice is important
Speak loud and let them see you are trouble
 
Think what is optional
Overcome all obstacles
No longer are we children
Anything we want is possible
Now it’s time for action
This is more than a reaction
Finished turning the other cheek
What rises is our faction
 
So Rise determination gives our soul flight
So Rise clenched fist with all our might
So Rise no chain can hold us down now
So Rise we are family our bonds are tight
 
Rise there is no way to fail
Rise so that we will prevail
Rise history holds only an echo
We are rising grab my hand come on let’s go

© 2009 Darruesh Eetraydes



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Wow. I read it a few of times over and over because your style in rhyming is so addictive! This has lyrical quality.

Definitely motivating. I'm not a fan of the 'f' word or any word like it hahaha but it felt like no other word could really give the same power.

Goodness I think I just became a fan :D
I have seen nothing like your writing here so far. Don't stop.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is very good in a rebellious sort of way. I always like when people take a stand and be their own selves instead of following a crowd, and your writing reflects that philosophy. The rhyming is nice cause it isn't forced. Nice flow to it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I read it a few of times over and over because your style in rhyming is so addictive! This has lyrical quality.

Definitely motivating. I'm not a fan of the 'f' word or any word like it hahaha but it felt like no other word could really give the same power.

Goodness I think I just became a fan :D
I have seen nothing like your writing here so far. Don't stop.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is very strong and gives me a story like picture. Great job

Posted 7 Years Ago



Brilliantly done.....Where's your hand...lets go to it...Rise and make a stand! Very well written inspiring piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the rhythm in the poem... It's really very motivating and refreshing... keep writing.. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2009
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Darruesh Eetraydes
Darruesh Eetraydes

TX



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Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..

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