Stone of Arcanist

Stone of Arcanist

A Book by Darruesh Eetraydes
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Angela, a pupil sorceror must protect her home along with her father, and their guardian to keep the Stone of Arcanist out of evil hands

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© 2010 Darruesh Eetraydes


Author's Note

Darruesh Eetraydes
I had a dream, and this is the result. This book will probably only be a few chapters long depending on how it goes. It was originally going to be a short story, but ended up looking like it was going to be mad long. Oh the audience is everyone because I wasn't sure about the content. This is just a warning

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You entered this writing into my original writings contest, and I just don't see how this is original. This kind of storyline has been wrote before in several fantasy novels that I have read. It reminds of Dragon Age: Origins was well. You did a good job with the writing, but I just feel like it needs some more work. One suggestion I would like to give is try printing it out, and reading over it to yourself. See where you could greatly improve.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 13 Years Ago


Indigo Rising Magazine seeks original and innovative material. This is a platform for writers to find a place to send their best and brightest work. We are open to a wide array
of arts and literature for readers to enjoy.

Best regards,

Tannen Dell.
Editor-in-Chief

&

Michael Whitaker
Co-Editor


Find us at: indigorisingmagazine.blogspot.com


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Darruesh Eetraydes
Darruesh Eetraydes

TX



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Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..

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