Inanna Whispers to Her Sister Inside My Head

Inanna Whispers to Her Sister Inside My Head

A Poem by David Benson
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After the word is destroyed, the Goddess whispers to a survivor.

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Fifteen years since winter snow wiped
clean world above and left us bricked
below: One quiet breath is all
that's left. I give it to you.

Three clarion notes of water,
a brimming trill behind your eyes. Lies,
memories of streams vaporized
in strobe-white flashes

of skies rippling gray grim smiles
where clouds and man and air once flew:
Splinters. Only you know my mouth
owns all their souls. A single breath,

this time without his poisonous
radiant rage, his smoke and fire
eyes. New for my sisters and you.

© 2011 David Benson


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Very powerful Write, Flowed very good. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very different. It sounds like mankind was destroyed, and women were left in the world without the hatred of man. It took me a couple of times to read over your poem to see if that was what you meant. Your poem was a good writing. I have no suggestions on how to improve it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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David Benson
David Benson

Mays Landing, NJ



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