Random Free Verse #1

Uhh I'm just venting a bit, seeing what I type. Don't worry about commenting with mean words on my writing ;) It won't change the fact that this just flowed and such.

I can't feel your heart for fear of flying.

I can't heal your soul,

Can 't you feel me trying.

You run to me with arms open wide

And I turn from you

Yielding to substantial pride.

 

Age differences, friendless monger.

I search to find a way with you,

But I can't get any stronger.

You weave your life in strings ahead,

And I search the night for ways to be dead.

 

So long to farewell and goodbye.

Today you seem to care,

Tomorrow is who was I.

I am lost in this madness of emotion.

Sinking lower into the sad notion-

That we will never.

 

I shriver and stare, avoiding your eyes.

Please trust me, please compromise.

I still love every inch and seek to know you more,

But right now the power is out and I need to go slow.

Seeking love they will never know,

I tried to show.

It's too much at times.

 

So I take my leave and turn in attire.

Every silky boy must drench his fire,

We danced a lot and talked for pleasure.

I searched your heart,

And made my measure.

Your's is ripe and strong and young,

Mine is broke and wrong and done.

Never could we.

Never will I.

Author's Note

Uhh....really just letting off some flow after a nice day of you know.

Reviews

[Dani California]

I am completely taken by this piece..
truly I am.

As I read it I became suddenly
very sad.... very lonely,
though it also has a peaceful
beauty to it.

Your words reach out and
touch the hearts of your readers..
or it did this one.

Pretty intense for just
letting off some flow..

Impressive. Indeed...

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

Hearts heal and even if memories don't fade, we can learn from mistakes we made. This is a powerful piece and yet so full of fear. The anwers you seek you may find here. Never give up hope for without it this world is a sad place. Leaving nothing but tears upon your face. Take care and God Bless. He will help us out of this mess.
Debby

[alternative_be]

And sometimes it all becomes too much ... Relationships can be confusing, certainly in case they give you the feeling that all of your energy is sucked out of you ...
Then it is time to slow down and reflect and like you have done: sit down and write it all down, so hopefully it is all out of your system...