Tribute to my brother

Tribute to my brother

A Poem by David the writer
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This is a tribute to my brother. The only one who truly understands me

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I love you like I love me

We're not the same anymore, it's plain to see

You're still apart

And without you, I wouldn't have complete heart

 

When times get rough I always turn to you

When I have problems getting me blue

You helped me out so many times and out of so many things

Thanx bro, for cutting my strings

 

I'm not controlled, you freed me

I'm different than I would have been

You gave my life just the right spin

It's plain to see

 

We're bros, it goes deeper than that

Because we pick the other off the ground

Instead of watching the other splat

And I would never change it around

 

I love you, like I love me

I couldn't live, not without you

It's plain to see

You get me through

 

You're better than the sound of a guitar chord

And my keyboard maybe mighter than the sword

But my words don't compare to the lyrics of your care for me

And that's the most plain to see

 

You saved my life, and made it worth living

And you gave me the gift that keeps giving

You gave me the song of a happy life

One worth the strife

 

I'm not controlled, you freed me

I'm different than I would have been

You gave my life just the right spin

It's plain to see

We're bros, it goes deeper than that

Because we pick the other off the ground

Instead of watching the other splat

And I would never change it around

 

© 2013 David the writer


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This is a beautiful tribute to your brother. One is lucky to have such a tight bond.
A brother is someone who is there for us all the way through life.
This was beautiful -bravo-

Posted 10 Years Ago


David the writer

10 Years Ago

Yeah, lucky is indeed right. Thanx
What a sweet thing to do...special brothers you are for sure...enjoyed the wonderful read...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


David the writer

10 Years Ago

Thanx
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A touching tribute. What did your brother think?

Posted 11 Years Ago


David the writer

11 Years Ago

He thought it was amazing. Brought tears to his eyes
Amazing tribute to your brother! I'm sure he is or would be honored if he read it (or has) :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


David the writer

11 Years Ago

He did, brung tears to his eyes. Thank you
Nice tribute my friend!


Posted 11 Years Ago


David the writer

11 Years Ago

Thanx, my brother means alot to me

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