The Old Man in the Park

The Old Man in the Park

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The old man sat on the long park bench

Where the children used to play,

He seemed to be harmless, sitting there

Though he’d be there every day.

His pockets were always full of sweets

And he’d smile a kindly smile,

But mothers would huddle nervously,

They suspected him of guile.

 

‘What do you think he’s up to,’ said

One mother to her friend,

‘I’ve read some terrible things about

Young children and old men.’

‘Can’t you see that he’s harmless,

He’s so old, and frail and sick,

He’s just like a kindly grandfather

Who walks with a walking stick.’

 

‘He shouldn’t be handing out those sweets,

We don’t know what’s inside,

What if it’s something horrible

And one of the children died?’

‘You need to become more trusting,

He’s out here in the light of day,

I hope that he didn’t hear you,

That’s a terrible thing to say!’

 

He smiled and nodded, and fell asleep

Sat back on the wooden seat,

His overcoat had seen better days

And so, the shoes on his feet,

He woke when the children whooped about,

Swung high on the rusty swings,

Tempted the children with his sweets

And to some, he muttered things.

 

‘What did the old man say to you?’

One whispered to her son,

“He asked if I wanted knowledge, if

I did, then he’d give me some.’

‘You’re not to speak to him anymore,’

The woman cried, in fear,

It isn’t right that he fills your head,

By rights, he shouldn’t be here.’

 

She went to sit on the wooden seat

And she grabbed him by the sleeve,

‘What do you mean by ‘knowledge’ then,

I think you ought to leave!’

‘I mean no harm, I’m a kindly man

And I love those children dear,

I’d give my all to be young again

And I feel young when they’re near.’

 

She nodded, said that she felt ashamed,

And patted him on the arm,

Then got up, leaving her son to play

She’d lost all sense of alarm.

The boy was tempted again by sweets

And the old man grabbed his hand,

‘Just stare right into my eyes, my boy,

I’ll take you to fairyland.’

 

The old man’s eyes were hypnotic when

He stared, and soon glowed red,

And then the little boy trembled as

A lifetime flowed in his head,

The old man smiled, and his hand relaxed

As the young boy turned to go,

‘At last,’ he capered, and danced about,

And the old man sank back, slow.

 

The mother came to collect her son,

He was nowhere on the green,

She went to the old man on the bench,

‘Where’s John? You must have seen!’

The old man struggled to sit upright

And held out a trembling hand,

‘I’ve waited ever so long for you,

But I don’t think I can stand!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2014 David Lewis Paget


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Ooooo! A twisted and frightening tale of stolen youth. This is like a tale of different kind of changeling tale. This is fun and macabre read.

And, a warning that there is cause to be ever vigilant. I know from my own childhood that terrors abound and a moment of inattention can be the start of a tragedy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Well DANG! That is macabre at its finest! Hats off to you and I am steering clear of old fellows on benches from this point forward.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My friend David, after reading this poem you are going to give mothers hard time sending away there children in park for sure. Your readers are never going to look at any old man sitting in the park the same way. Kudos to your writing though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stolen from the cupped hands of innocence, a telling and twisted tale! well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice twist there David, a scary tale and somehow reminds me of a scene in a movie called Twilight Zone when a group of old folks return to their youth and play as children, always liked that scene, thank you David :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb poem, and I absolutely didn't expect the twist in the tale.

T

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I suspected this old man right from the beginning. Mothers have every reason to be careful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooooo! A twisted and frightening tale of stolen youth. This is like a tale of different kind of changeling tale. This is fun and macabre read.

And, a warning that there is cause to be ever vigilant. I know from my own childhood that terrors abound and a moment of inattention can be the start of a tragedy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That certainly didn't end the way I was expecting. I'm really glad you wrote that =]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is the first poem I have read on this site. What a great start, compelling gripping and has a fantastic flow and rhyme scheme. Excellent. Thank you :) x

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Colorado Brian

9 Years Ago

Louise, when I first read a poem written by David Lewis Paget, I thought, "I want to write like THAT.. read more
Louise.xx

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I shall be sure to check these out :) x

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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