The Proposal

The Proposal

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

I paced the floor by the tavern door

In the hopes she’d come my way,

She didn’t know that I’d still be there

For I hadn’t said I’d stay,

We’d parted there on a bitter note

On a dark and moonless night,

I’d told her I wouldn’t marry her,

But now, I thought, I might.

 

I’d filled my head with the pros and cons

And the pros had come up short,

I’d have to steady and settle down

And that was my major thought.

I’d been so free that it seemed to me

I’d be hoist on a single hook,

Why would I trade a library

For the sake of a single book?

 

But then I began to doubt myself

As her scent came wafting through,

That scent of fire with the name ‘Desire’

That she’d said, ‘I wore for you!’

I’d pressed my lips to her silken throat

And I’d felt my power surge,

As she lay back and surrendered to

Some overwhelming urge.

 

Where would I find her likes again,

I paced, and bit at my lip,

We’d courted then since I don’t know when,

She’d said, ‘we’re joined at the hip.’

But then I’d panicked and almost ran

I could see my freedoms gone,

‘If you don’t ask me, there’s them that will!’

Like a fool I said, ‘So long!’

 

I knew that she’d seen Montgomery,

He’d eyed her off at the ball,

And set up a wager, he to me,

He’d be first to see her fall.

She’d left that night in a coach and four

With him riding close behind,

While I’d returned to the tavern then

And drank til my eyes were blind.

 

I heard he was going to propose that night

And the thought had made me sick,

I’d have to make a decision now

And I’d have to make it quick.

I saddled Sally, the old grey mare

And I whipped her out the yard,

For Cauter Hall was at Risdon Weir

And I’d have to ride it hard.

 

We caught the coach at the meadow rise

And we passed it on the fly,

They must have seen a demon rider

And horse against the sky,

My cloak flew out as the wind blew up

On the road at Walker’s Flat,

And somewhere there in the cold night air

I lost my only hat.

 

We skirted the ground at Risdon Weir

And we splashed on through the Ford,

The lights of the mansion grew more clear

As we galloped to Cauter Hall,

Her hooves a-clatter on cobblestones

I leapt from the horse’s back,

And beat on the ancient cedar door

In a frontal, forced attack.

 

Montgomery stood in the passage there

And he turned to her to shout,

I raced on in with a sense of sin,

With a punch, I laid him out.

Catherine came from an ante-room

And she said, ‘How dare you do…’

But I went down on my knees to her,

‘I’m here for marrying you!’

 

She seemed surprised, then her laughing eyes

She tried to hide with a fan,

‘I knew that you’d come around one day

If you saw me play with a man.

I’ll take you dear, but I’ll make it clear

That my guest was never the one,

We never marry our cousins here…’

Then I knew that I’d been done!

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Wow that is a very beautiful poem. Reminds me a lot of a Cinderella theme. And of course, competition. I liked it a lot. And it was nice to see the main character in the poem get his victory, although, I'm sure it would be embarrassing to discover Montgomery was her cousin all this time. Very nicely done.

Stacey

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You are the perfect story teller in another superb write. Class!

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I am laughing so hard right now
Oh its perfect

Can't possibly say more

Perfect .......

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haha she really caught him out, another good surprise end David, how long can you keep it up? i'm guessing we have a long way to go yet, thanks for this lovely tale, really enjoyed it :)

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WOW! Absolutely brilliant. What more can I say? You never cease to amaze me dear Poet! I am in awe.

Kind regards,

Helena

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Hi David. Very funny!! It takes a woman to know who knows her mind to convince a man he knows his!!! you have delivered this so very well!!! Loved the story and loved the slightly different rhythm here. Great read, as alays!! alf

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Fantastic from start to finish. You had me as I never thought of that clever ending. Good one Mate. Valentine

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That was very clever of her, but she should have played hard to get for a while. This guy seems lke a rather shallow character. Freedom might come to mean more than a wife eventually...

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They say men are the stronger sex......that might be the case physically, but that lacy fan that hides the smile is held in the hand of a force that brings men to their knees! Why the consideration of "pros and cons", when all it takes is the mere thought of a rival for your character to pack his saddle, losing not only his good sense, but his only hat. "We never marry our cousins here"....sometimes the reasons for odd behavior!! LOL! Loved every syllable, DLP......Keep it coming...Barbz

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That had me cracking. Gripping tale and amazing imagery. I had to hold myself from skipping to the last.
ANTO pointed out all I wanted to.. so..
That's one brilliant woman who will keep him on his toes. Enjoyed it, David.

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"But now, I thought, I might.." this made me laugh.

"Why would I trade a library
For the sake of a single book?" - another cracker - I have heard variations of this sentiment based on beef. ;p

"Her hooves a-clatter on cobblestones" - classic! Loving the imagery in this one DLP.

"I raced on in with a sense of sin,
With a punch, I laid him out." - Wayhayyy - this is very Errol Flynn, love it !!

Haha - brilliant - she forced his hand and he folded like a napkin. What a clever woman he was marrying. I liked this very much David.




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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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