Together

Together

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

I need a woman to ride with me,
To prove that she loves me too,
A woman to sit astride of me,
When one together makes two,
It’s ever been the way of the world
To come together as one,
For one together may not forever
Be taken apart, undone.

Whenever I find myself alone
And missing her vital spark,
I look for somebody, complementary
All alone in the dark.
For she may be there looking for me
As I am looking for her,
We’ll always know by the eyes that glow
If love is the only spur.

I’ll know by the velvet touch of her hand
The rosy blush on her cheek,
I’ll know when we come across each other
Far more than once in a week,
For fate has the strangest tricks to play
It leads us all on a dance,
By throwing the me and you together 
It’s never coincidence.

So woman, come from the shadows now
To meet, wherever you are,
A pad of feet on a lonely street
Or locked in a passing car.
We need each other to be together
If only to say we live,
Come be a part of this lonely heart,
I only have love to give.

David Lewis Paget

© 2017 David Lewis Paget


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how many times i have sung this song ..and you say it so honestly ..and i can feel the vulnerability this would take in a man ... the sentiments are true .. the rhythm and rhyme a readers delight ..as always sir ..but this one particularly sings to me ..its just so ....well ..a seasoned position on true love and need .. i love it! :) i have no suggestions ..i simply enjoyed the read i did!:)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ah, true love we desperately need...hoping we find it in someone...well told.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I liked the want and the need in these words. Nice to have a woman that is part of our life. Thank you David for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


how many times i have sung this song ..and you say it so honestly ..and i can feel the vulnerability this would take in a man ... the sentiments are true .. the rhythm and rhyme a readers delight ..as always sir ..but this one particularly sings to me ..its just so ....well ..a seasoned position on true love and need .. i love it! :) i have no suggestions ..i simply enjoyed the read i did!:)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your rhymes and meter flow very naturally. Your last stanza is definitely my favorite. Great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 2, 2017
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Tags: complementary, blush, fate, shadows

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David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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