Black Gold

Black Gold

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The Dad was dour, his face was sour

When he came home from the pit,

He looked like a furnace stoker but

That wasn’t the half of it…

His fists were like a couple of hams

And he used the blighters, too,

The Mam would hear his foot on the step

And hurry to serve his stew.

 

She wore his bruises over her face,

Her arms and her legs and more,

I’d seen her body all over then

For I was coming-up four,

I’d watched the blood run down her leg

As she cleaned herself with a rag,

Whenever he’d come home roaring drunk,

Use Mam as a punching bag!

 

My sister Else was barely ten

When he made her work at the pit,

She struggled to push a cart of coal

Until she was almost sick.

The manager was a brutal man

With a knotted, leather strap,

If Else was slow or got vertigo

He’d lay it across her back!

 

I never heard Mam complain to him,

I guess that she didn’t dare,

She’d rub some cream into Else’s wounds

And run a brush through her hair.

‘It’s hard, but you’ll toughen up, my girl,

He said, as a sort of scold,

‘You’d better respect what we’re mining here,

Just think of it as Black Gold!’

 

‘Think of it as Black Gold,’ he’d said…

(The sort that gets into your pores,

The dust that gives you a crippled lung

And your skin gets covered in sores.

The cough that’s keeping the house awake

When everyone needs to sleep,

The sulphur smell round the chimney-piece

As you watch your mother weep!)

 

He dragged me out, and he took me in

When I was only eight,

He said, ‘Now look here, fella-me-lad,

It’s time that you pulled your weight!’

They started me at tuppence a day

And sat me down in the shaft,

I had to open and close a trap

To help to create the draught.

 

The hours were long, the days were long

We worked a twelve hour shift,

It took me an hour to get to the face,

Clambering over the drift,

I didn’t get time to go to school,

Still sign my name with an ‘x’,

But I’m learning now at the Institute

Just to try for a little respect!

 

When I was ten, they sent me down

With a pick to the old coal face,

Where miners hammered and banged like hell

And they tried to make me race,

Poor Else, still pushing the trucks of coal,

Her back had formed in a hump,

The boys would whistle and jeer at her

For her legs were like two stumps.

 

New-fangled ships were coming in,

The ones of steel and steam,

‘It’s only good for the working man,’

The Dad said: ‘Good for the team!’

But some of the stopes were caving in

The mine was in full retreat,

We’d pull what pillars of coal were left

And send them up to the street.

 

The Dad was working the furthest pitch

While Else sat crippled and old,

She’d ripped a tendon and looked quite lost

As she sat by a pillar of coal,

She waved me away to the further stope

And attacked the coal with a pick,

The pillar came suddenly crashing down

And the roof  -  it followed it!

 

I never saw Mam cry for The Dad,

She cried for our Else instead,

‘She never had much of a life at all,

I’m glad the old bugger’s dead!’

Now the years have passed, and I understand

That The Dad was true to his kind,

He never had much of a chance at all

And he’s buried, still in the mine!

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2012 David Lewis Paget


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Well done, my fellow bard. This story can still relate to current events of today, especially in the societies we are members of. One thing I thought was very ironic was the fact that the father was buried from the start( in life and even death). Your imagery was also quite remarkable. Great job, David.

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I love your stories through poetry
Your gift is one of epic apportions
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apportion in case anyone thought this was a typo: a branch of anthropology dealing with the geograph.. read more
Excellent narrative about the struggles of the children in the coal mines, and this story becomes more tragic because of the child abuse. You managed to lay put very profound emotions from the eyes of a child that touch the reader with justified repulsion towards the father, a character so defined in this poem - with greed. Amazing skill you have!

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David, this is an amazing story! I'm just awed by your ability to write these great stories and kep your rhyme and flow so intact! Thank you for sharing these with us.

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wonderful writing david! i like the compassion you extend the dad
at the end, not sure i could have managed that. Excellent!

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You've captured the heart of this tortured family and their lives. Wonderful writing!

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Your indepth approach and writing requires dedicated concentration and it's worth every moment.

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As difficult as it is to read about lives of injustice and hardship - whether past, present or fictional - I think it does us good to remember what we have to be grateful for. Your poem here has so many layers. It addresses the problem of child labor, but also abuse, marriage and fatherhood. Those of us who have been privileged with parental love, a bit of education about psychology and the ability to really give of ourselves are able to give our mates and children a better life, no matter what difficulties are thrown at us. The poem is direct, a wonderful nerrative and heartbreaking. It reminds me of Flogging Molly's song "Faraway Boys" in its inevitable tragedy.

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I was reading about the teutonic knights of Germany and the way the Russians seem to be always in a fight with them with obvious results. Digging....a frequent theme in your poems....brings up such gems of surprises, imagining perhaps that a teutonic knight raised a light of passion that tried to create an Aryan race of perfection. Thereafter it appears, it may have tried to punish itself.

It seems merciful that we begin our lessons on rationality in a haphazard way. Given what we have grown into in our human passions, it is merciful to see the truth of ourselves....esp the difficult areas...slowly. But the courage in the veins to do so, must surely have come from the mine in the English waters. It may help to know that your friends are with you.



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You give your poetry and tell a right tale aswell. I come to you when I want a rad thats enjoyable. And they never seem to fail :)

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Mr. Paget .. this is a Marvelousl Story/Poem..Thank you for sharing your talents !

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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