By Your Side

By Your Side

A Poem by Daydreaming
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Not only have I deeply admired you for as long as I can remember, but I've never been able to say a single word. Seasons have come and gone, we've moved to different states. My biggest regret.

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Unable to utter words of affection,
I continue to avoid your detection.

I watch the boys come and go,
I'm the man for you this I Know.

Continuing to come for their physical needs,
Please hear my emotional pleads.

I'll love you with all my might,
For you I'll continue to fight.

Flowers, sweets, kisses and joy,
You'll no longer be a physical toy.

Open your eyes, look this way,
In your line of sight forever I'll stay.

Allow me to be more than just a friend,
All of your scars and bruises I'll mend.

Together lets walk,
Together lets talk.

Together with me,
You'll see.

A different place with love and affection,
Lets continue to create a beautiful connection.



© 2015 Daydreaming


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I did like this poem.
"Together lets walk,
Together lets talk.
Together with me,
You'll see."
The above line are needed. We need conversation and good company. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


only a true gentleman could write this, very well done :) Even as a female I know this feeling very well too

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dude. this seems to be my permanent position in life with certain women. I could not have written this as perfect as you have done. I applaud you. You, dear friend, are a champion

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreaming

8 Years Ago

Champion! Lol, thanks Sam. I'm glad that you enjoy reading my writing as well.
This is great! Beautiful expression of emotion and pining.
I love how you wish to be her sort of white knight, the one guy who will treat her as she deserves when all others use her as an object of sexual gratification...
It kinda reminds me of the song "White Men in Black Suits" by Everclear:

"She is just a girl, she is doing what she can
She dances topless
When she's not playing in her band
Such a pretty girl, happy in an ugly place
Watching all the pretty people doin' lots of ugly things
...
Yeah she takes a bus
Over to the north side of the city
She goes to work stripping for the rich white men
All the words they give her
Make her feel so soft and pretty
She wears them but they never ever seem to fit"


Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading this. It has a very nice flow to it and one can feel the longing and need within the words. I love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice wording here, I especially like: "Please hear my emotional pleads" it's a very strong statement.

Insight.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem, one many can relate to. Written with such passion and longing ... loved it.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very beautiful, my friend. I loved it! I

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is so beautiful, i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

you're welcome. i enjoy reading
Daydreaming

8 Years Ago

Well if you have time or interest, try reading all my Visits short stories :)
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

i will do that, :)

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Added on November 16, 2015
Last Updated on November 16, 2015
Tags: Love, Beautiful, Women, Men, Feelings, Thoughts, Poem, Short Story

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Daydreaming
Daydreaming

New York City, NY



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