Stumbling

Stumbling

A Poem by Dayran
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For submission to Tovli's Ten words

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Stumbling



 

 

A hobo is a part


Like history spoken in past tense


In a universe that began with a worm


Cooked without oil


In an iron skillet


Baked bread and was fine-dined


But stumbles as he speaks


And we ask ... why?

© 2015 Dayran


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I like the "tease" of the poem and the flow. It has a didactic message, yet is playful. nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOL....I'm loving all the different "takes" on the 10/40 words!

"A worm cooked without oil! " OMG.....so funny! Thanks for submitting this to Tovli's contest!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 27, 2015
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Dayran
Dayran

Malacca, Malaysia



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' Akara Mudhala Ezhuththellaam Aadhi Bhagavan Mudhatre Ulaku ' Translation ..... All the World's literature, Is from the young mind of the Original Experiencer. .. more..

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