Elijah and the Surprise

There was a young boy called Elijah

Who went looking for his sister and spied her

But she caught him out

And gave a great shout

While holding a creepy big spider!

 

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Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

a silly little nursery rhyme, made me smile and poems like that are the one people remember for always,

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting tale. Never know what will catch sister doing? I like the ending. A excellent poem.
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[Tina Kline]

Very nicely done. The creepy spider might teach a lesson, however. A fun poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Ha-Ha- that will teach him to spy on his sister, love it!

[underwriter]

hahaha! love it!! you have described them perfectly!! love it!!!