Persuasion

PERSUASION


Persuasion of the heart
persistence of the mind
reeling in determination
naked sophistication
antagonizing narcosis
reinventing your liberation
narrowing originality
powerless practicality

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

In some ways this reminds me of a woman talking about her man, which if i am off the mark than tell me. But this sort of makes me think of the last straw before a she finally writes that note, text, or email saying why she is tired of him.




Yet again, I may as be as wrong as a tourist sitting at SFO when their flight is at Oakland International. But the images are very clear and make me think of a guy missing life, not seeing whats in front of him, and a girl just wanting and leaving.

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice. This one is also very powerful. Love your writing

[r. f. jordan]

I like the lexicon in this one, and i'm not an easy sell. i like the differentiation between the practical versus the original. well done.

[Holly Soques]

Wow. This is really powerful just in its sheer concise-ness and complete lack of connectives. Am I right in assuming this refers to drug use and abuse? Otherwise, I may have gotten completely the wrong gist (actually, I first thought the 'persuasion' alluded to immoral advertising! lol) but this flows like a haiku and is just brilliant succinct. Wonderful!