Persuasion

Persuasion

A Poem by Deandra Dawn

PERSUASION


Persuasion of the heart
persistence of the mind
reeling in determination
naked sophistication
antagonizing narcosis
reinventing your liberation
narrowing originality
powerless practicality

© 2012 Deandra Dawn


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Deandra Dawn
Short and to the point....

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In some ways this reminds me of a woman talking about her man, which if i am off the mark than tell me. But this sort of makes me think of the last straw before a she finally writes that note, text, or email saying why she is tired of him.




Yet again, I may as be as wrong as a tourist sitting at SFO when their flight is at Oakland International. But the images are very clear and make me think of a guy missing life, not seeing whats in front of him, and a girl just wanting and leaving.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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In some ways this reminds me of a woman talking about her man, which if i am off the mark than tell me. But this sort of makes me think of the last straw before a she finally writes that note, text, or email saying why she is tired of him.




Yet again, I may as be as wrong as a tourist sitting at SFO when their flight is at Oakland International. But the images are very clear and make me think of a guy missing life, not seeing whats in front of him, and a girl just wanting and leaving.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. This one is also very powerful. Love your writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the lexicon in this one, and i'm not an easy sell. i like the differentiation between the practical versus the original. well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This is really powerful just in its sheer concise-ness and complete lack of connectives. Am I right in assuming this refers to drug use and abuse? Otherwise, I may have gotten completely the wrong gist (actually, I first thought the 'persuasion' alluded to immoral advertising! lol) but this flows like a haiku and is just brilliant succinct. Wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 17, 2012
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Deandra Dawn
Deandra Dawn

Orlando, FL



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My name is Deandra Dawn and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I also go by the name, Ravishing Raven, and I am currently reworking my website. What else is there to know when there .. more..

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