Treachery of Nature

Treachery of Nature

A Poem by AcasualPawn
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Breeze. Gale and tempest plotted against me......

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Gentle breeze embraces me
Making me cozy
entwined me' my sense, unprotected.

Suddnely

Fiery Gale started stroking vulnerable me
Provoking my erect standing
Sustaining the sneak attack.

Equipped for next round.

But abruptly heard raging sounds
Its assault of savage tempest
Praying for precise juncture
To rip my firm footing.

© 2017 AcasualPawn



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The unexpected storm comes in every one's life. After all who can have a perfect life?
Keep writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the effect conveyed. The sudden turn of events. Twisted nature. Very well pictured.

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Thankyou for your understanding...
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Its a pleasure...
Yeah! Thats just the opposite
But I liked the way you carved it along!

Brilliant work :)
Keep going!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Yes, both the gentle beauty and devastating force of Nature must be respected by us all. Lovely poem rich with vivid imagery and good form and flow. Effective separation of verses marking changes in weather. Well-penned!

Posted 1 Year Ago


wow, this was really great.the two sides of nature has been very well described. i loved it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Tnankyou darkmist for understanding...
DarkMist

1 Year Ago

You're welcome
so we must stand strong against nature and it`s attacks on us

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Nature can be gentle as well as savage... Depending upon on its form..... Example wind=breeze, gale.. read more
I enjoyed the word choice!

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze which.. read more
I really like this, your style or writing is very interesting to me. I love reading how others write, as I'm almost compulsive with the way I have to have mine, so it's so refreshing to see others. Thank you for your comment earlier :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review fellow poet
hmm not sure if this is about sexual adventures or dungeons and dragons. Good read!

Posted 1 Year Ago


AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze whic.. read more
Diane

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the meaning! It was worth the read even though I was far off on the meaning. Enjoyed e.. read more
AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Thanks for passing by diane..
wow.... I love it!!!! this is so good

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AcasualPawn

1 Year Ago

Thankyou DARKARTZ for your appreciation

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Added on August 1, 2017
Last Updated on August 2, 2017
Tags: Psychology, reality, nature

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