Treachery of Nature

Treachery of Nature

A Poem by SSR
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Breeze. Gale and tempest plotted against me......

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Gentle breeze embraces me
Making me cozy
entwined me' my sense, unprotected.

Suddnely

Fiery Gale started stroking vulnerable me
Provoking my erect standing
Sustaining the sneak attack.

Equipped for next round.

But abruptly heard raging sounds
Its assault of savage tempest
Praying for precise juncture
To rip my firm footing.

© 2017 SSR



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The unexpected storm comes in every one's life. After all who can have a perfect life?
Keep writing!

Posted 2 Months Ago


I like the effect conveyed. The sudden turn of events. Twisted nature. Very well pictured.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Thankyou for your understanding...
DIVYA

3 Months Ago

Its a pleasure...
Yeah! Thats just the opposite
But I liked the way you carved it along!

Brilliant work :)
Keep going!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Yes, both the gentle beauty and devastating force of Nature must be respected by us all. Lovely poem rich with vivid imagery and good form and flow. Effective separation of verses marking changes in weather. Well-penned!

Posted 3 Months Ago


wow, this was really great.the two sides of nature has been very well described. i loved it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Tnankyou darkmist for understanding...
DarkMist

3 Months Ago

You're welcome
so we must stand strong against nature and it`s attacks on us

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Nature can be gentle as well as savage... Depending upon on its form..... Example wind=breeze, gale.. read more
I enjoyed the word choice!

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze which.. read more
I really like this, your style or writing is very interesting to me. I love reading how others write, as I'm almost compulsive with the way I have to have mine, so it's so refreshing to see others. Thank you for your comment earlier :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Thanks for the review fellow poet
hmm not sure if this is about sexual adventures or dungeons and dragons. Good read!

Posted 3 Months Ago


SSR

3 Months Ago

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze whic.. read more
Diane

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the meaning! It was worth the read even though I was far off on the meaning. Enjoyed e.. read more
SSR

3 Months Ago

Thanks for passing by diane..
wow.... I love it!!!! this is so good

Posted 3 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SSR

3 Months Ago

Thankyou DARKARTZ for your appreciation

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Added on August 1, 2017
Last Updated on August 2, 2017
Tags: Psychology, reality, nature

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