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~~ RE Birth ~~

~~ RE Birth ~~

A Poem by Debbie_Philly

THIS IS A VERY OLD POEM ABOUT 2 YEARS Maybe 3 YEARS OLD... JUST REPOSTING !!!

REBIRTH

The dance is over, air expelling

from my lungs like exploding bubbles

I' am drowning , slowly descending

like a graceful butterfly who has lost

it's wings

A backward plunge into the

murky depths , arms expanded

in light freeform motions.

I must except this chapter in which

I've just closed, set out to sea on

a barge of reverence.

My life is now movement in words.

The twirling motion of the pen writing

in the next move.

Rhythmical steps can no longer tell

my story. So I go gracefully, bow out

to pick up a new style of interpretation.

Extending a hand to clean white

parchment that waits for me on the

floor of this page.

The spot light no longer on the dancer.

It shines on a new truth now, fact that

I freely embrace as I lay the dream to rest.

Picking up a new dream , one of words

of tales, and of stories meant to be heard.

So drift down now sweet dancer in beautiful

dark arabesque motions, into the endless abyss

that was once clear visions.

Sleep now as I awake to a new day filled with

poetic beginnings.

Dance now in a different pattern, the moves

are changed but the world is the same.

Art of the mind while the body welcomes rest

Time filled with words yet to be said, spoken words

yet to be heard, songs yet to be sung, friends yet

to be embraced.

Swimming back up to the top of the waters

as a new hope is defined, the birth of a poet.

 

By:Debbie Mills Kelly


© 2012 Debbie_Philly



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Debbie_Philly
THIS IS A VERY OLD POEM ABOUT 2 YEARS Maybe 3 YEARS OLD... JUST REPOSTING !!!

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Old but defenitly not best left buried, a beautiful piece woven with an art for growth and expansion.
A journey portrayed very cleary within your words, and a graceful adn elegant journey. You are a very talented indavudal and i will happily say that you stumbled across this talent that you write with because it is utterly beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

I am deeply humbled Ama... thank you very much.... what a beautiful thing to say.... Im happy you ge.. read more



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this is one of the best poems I've ever read

thanks for sending a request for it.

I can say no more about it, seeing as I am as speechless as I've ever been in regards to a work

encore.

-Dream

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

WOw Dream really thank you so much.. your words inspire me !! :) xo
closed

3 Years Ago

yw. and likewise
Lovely and greatly inspiring--I'll be sure to read this whenever I feel like giving up...because you didn't...yeah. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

awwww Writer !! Thank you... Never give up... Im sorry it took me so long to see this... I will be o.. read more
Writer #00

3 Years Ago

I won't, hopefully, and no problem : )
Extending a hand to clean white
parchment that waits for me on the
floor of this page.
exquisite. My "Rebirths" are always grimy....but this is beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) sorry it took me so long... I had hand surgery :)
Old but defenitly not best left buried, a beautiful piece woven with an art for growth and expansion.
A journey portrayed very cleary within your words, and a graceful adn elegant journey. You are a very talented indavudal and i will happily say that you stumbled across this talent that you write with because it is utterly beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

I am deeply humbled Ama... thank you very much.... what a beautiful thing to say.... Im happy you ge.. read more
great really....intertwining is a word I think describes it well...never throw out the older stuff there could be gold in there

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

Thank you Wood... and I agree... I do have some really bad ones from a long time ago... but I didn't.. read more
Prophetic!! Positive and inspiring :) A new beginning ......... Great job!
I love this :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much Eileen.... I think its time to post something a bit newer...lol. ;) Thank you lo.. read more
EileenMarie

5 Years Ago

It's great... It's relevant :)... Doesnt matter when it was written!!
Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

Thank you hun !!! :)
I really like this. A good poem about change and starting over. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Emo.... its an old one ... trying to build the page with the past poems then go on.. read more
I used to dance... now I write

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Debbie_Philly

PHILADELPHIA, PA



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Hello everyone, My name is Debbie , I have been writing for about 13 years now, I'm 51 years old and live in Philly. I used to have a show on Blog talk Radio called REVERSE with Michael Quigg every o.. more..

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