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WILDWOOD DAZE

WILDWOOD DAZE

A Poem by Debbie_Philly
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A Poem that I wrote on a bus down to Wildwood NJ

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WILDWOOD DAZE

April 7, 2011 at 1:19pm

WILDWOOD DAZE..


As I ride this clanking some what rocky bus


we know as New Jersey Transit I ponder


my destination, while I joy ride to sunlit beaches


and do wop dreams that can only be WILDWOOD.


I sit here fighting that draining tired feeling that


always tries to steal my sunshine.


I will NOT allow it, for I am on my way to SANCTUARY.


AH' Sweet sanctuary the smell of the boardwalk , beaches laden 


with jelly fish and the call of the fudgie wugie man waits for me.


The smell of my childhood vacations, nostalgia flows through


my senses as if I were ten again.


I may be inspired to write a brilliant Shakespearian piece on


my way to Cape May County, who really knows.


What I do know is , I want to run my toes through the glistening


sand , have seaweed wash past me as I yell " AH SEAWEED"


Eat funnel cake and Curly fries slurp down clams and play putt putt


ride the biggest coaster they have all while staying a t a two star


motel from 1964.


Where I can bring back my youth as I forget the crime ridden abode


I call my home.


Breath in salt air , jump through a crashing wave as it washes my troubles


away, if only for a few days


As A Foot Note.....I wrote this about 4 years ago on my way to Wildwood NJ....On the 2 hour bus ride...lol. Thank you...for reading :)i



© 2014 Debbie_Philly



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AH' Sweet sanctuary the smell of the boardwalk , beaches laden


with jelly fish and the call of the fudgie wugie man waits for me.

-----------------you have increased in me wanderlust :)
Love :)
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Aww Thank you Anand :) What a wonderful compliment :)



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What a perfect picture you've penned. It brought back so many memories of the Jade motel, the three in the morning last calls, and that damn recording "watch the tram car please" Thank you ! you made my night !

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

1 Year Ago

awwww Thank you !!! Yes ...Love Wildwood... the one of my childhood.... there was nothing better... .. read more
B. Boileau

1 Year Ago

Your entirely welcome... I was rised in Moorestown NJ (exit 4) live in Vegas now
Its been ten years since I was at Wildwood, and I get a strong nostalgia from reading this as well! You described the atmosphere pretty well, great read for a snowy winter day for sure. Good write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

1 Year Ago

Thank you... and Im sorry it took so long to reply... I have been out of commission. I loved Wildwoo.. read more
AH' Sweet sanctuary the smell of the boardwalk , beaches laden


with jelly fish and the call of the fudgie wugie man waits for me.

-----------------you have increased in me wanderlust :)
Love :)
***********************************************************************************************************************************************

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Aww Thank you Anand :) What a wonderful compliment :)
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ANM
Really good poem I felt I was on the bus taking in the view!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much ANM :)
It's nice to read something that's so physical for a change. We all write a lot of abstract stuff, this one stands out as almost purely physical, and it delights the senses. The saltiness of the see, the sand underneath the feet, you captured it all. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece! =)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you Devesh so much it means allot that you read and I really appreciate it... I will be over t.. read more
Devesh

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
It's always great to have happy childhood memories to lean on. This poem transported me there with all its colorful descriptions.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Michael... I'm glad you enjoyed it .. good to see you ! :)
very fun to read.
you have a diverse art style

I like it

-Dream

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dream I appreciate that :)
I like that fudgie wugie man lol ... Love this poem!!
Nothing like the Jersey Shore.♥


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thats for sure Maria... I know you know. ;) Thank you !! :)
Oh yeah i can imagine the wonder this place has. To have survived so long it has become an institution within the memories of so many. For most it simply feels like home

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Yes indeed Tate.... Thank you so much for reading... its been a while..I will be over to your place .. read more
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

All is well thank you had dinner with my wife for our 4th anniversary Life is good
Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

awww Congrats Tate Thats Beautiful !!! :)

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Hello everyone, My name is Debbie , I have been writing for about 13 years now, I'm 51 years old and live in Philly. I used to have a show on Blog talk Radio called REVERSE with Michael Quigg every o.. more..

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