Without Gravity

Without Gravity

A Poem by Debbie_Philly

Without Gravity

Floating on air with no boundaries a ride just for you

the endless space, a stream of consciousness without restrictions.

Free Floating on that thin line between earth and space

no clicking of the clock no free forming chaos.

Fallen into endless nothingness, the line between life and death

holding on or letting go of it all.

Earth’s beauty is so vast, oh what the angels must see from their view

oh what we take for granted.

The roar of the ocean, the colors of fall, a cool summer breeze, first

fallen snow … the smell of spring eternal.

Gravity keeps our feet on the ground while our minds let go.

When death is near I hope it’s like floating through space, celestial

in its beauty, endless in its wonder like life itself.

No more pulling of the gravity with a final freeing of the mind and a

drifting towards hope.

Debbie Kelly 12/11/14

2:15 am

 

 

 

 


© 2014 Debbie_Philly



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This is beautiful. It keeps us grounded until the end and then we need to fly:

Gravity keeps our feet on the ground while our minds let go.
When death is near I hope it’s like floating through space, celestial
in its beauty, endless in its wonder like life itself.

Gorgeous imagery.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much... I really do hope its like that :) sorry Im just answering I have been having co.. read more



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Wonderful. I connected to the poem as a person who dreams through his sub conscious mind. He doesn't know whether he is in reality or in his dreams. It's the gravity pull that reminds him of his reality.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Debbie_Philly

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much... yes I lucid dream allot as well.. sorry I havent answered before having compute.. read more
Gravity is a situation. I tried to help a guy from it once, but his gravity ended up pulling me down instead of me lifting him up.

I've been on that line and teetered wondering which way I was gonna go. I decided to stay and rightfully so. It wasn't for me to choose after all.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

Your reply could be a poem its self :) Yes you have to be careful with gravity.... it can pull you w.. read more
This is beautiful. It keeps us grounded until the end and then we need to fly:

Gravity keeps our feet on the ground while our minds let go.
When death is near I hope it’s like floating through space, celestial
in its beauty, endless in its wonder like life itself.

Gorgeous imagery.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much... I really do hope its like that :) sorry Im just answering I have been having co.. read more
A splendid write, loved the imagery

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much !!! :)
I love this peace! Very descriptive and captivating. Nice write :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

Thank you... and Im sorry it took so long to reply... I have been out of commission
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Amazing mantra, care if I join ya? :) This joyful wonder keeps our hearts in tune. Beautiful piece of art!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

Thank you... and Im sorry it took so long to reply... I have been out of commission and yes you can .. read more
you reminded me of my need to fly, thank you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

awww Im so glad :) Thank you... and Im sorry it took so long to reply... I have been out of commissi.. read more
i really like this...gravity pulls us down to earth...and sometimes figuratively there is gravity keeping us from achieving what we colud....we let that pull hold us down...
but oh, i like this theme...what if there were no gravity at all....what if we just felt free do do whatever we please...chasing those dreams.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

2 Years Ago

So So true !!! Thank you... and Im sorry it took so long to reply... I have been out of commission
jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

it is nice to see you back around, Debbie....

j.
Gorgeous poem! I love your descriptions.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Chaise !!! :)
Beautiful use of description. Allowed the reader to feel the words.
"No more pulling of the gravity with a final freeing of the mind and a
drifting towards hope."
I liked the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend.... I have been blocked with no inspiration lately....and no computer..l.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I'm glad to see you back. Please send the read request.

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Hello everyone, My name is Debbie , I have been writing for about 13 years now, I'm 51 years old and live in Philly. I used to have a show on Blog talk Radio called REVERSE with Michael Quigg every o.. more..

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