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A temptation beyond reason, testing
man`s ability to endure.
Sometime`s a flower will be plucked,
there is no other way.
Tasting only increases the hunger,
admiring tests the need.
The incense will linger in man`s mind.
I chose this one to review because it was
the most recent . Perhaps it was not a
wise decision. It is so hard to write when
subjected to the most desirable condition
that man will ever survive.
Does it sound like you convinced me ?
The truth is , the writing is so believable ,
so provocative that reader is immediately
drawn in, filled with an incredible delight.
Perfect example of fine writing.
My rating ------ 100 %
----- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 4 Months Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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