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My Lips So Inviting


A Poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)

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This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.


 

 

My Lips So Inviting

My Lips are an invitation meant just for you,
You may be surprised by what these lips can do.

They are soft and answering when they are kissed,
Or they cans tempt and tease or deliver utter bliss.

Caress and kissing, looking at them you will fantasize.
All the ways they can satisfy, or tease and tantalize.

Come taste the dew upon these glistening passionate lips
Matched only by the desire you will find within this rounded hips.

Come and taste of my passionate flower petals layered with desire.
Fan this spark into a flame of loves raging depths until its a burning fire.

Share these things I offer you now in our loves physical passionate uniting.
As we together we share all that these passionate lips have been inviting.

photo courtesy of tinypic.com

 


© 2009 Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)



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A temptation beyond reason, testing
man`s ability to endure.
Sometime`s a flower will be plucked,
there is no other way.
Tasting only increases the hunger,
admiring tests the need.
The incense will linger in man`s mind.

I chose this one to review because it was
the most recent . Perhaps it was not a
wise decision. It is so hard to write when
subjected to the most desirable condition
that man will ever survive.

Does it sound like you convinced me ?
The truth is , the writing is so believable ,
so provocative that reader is immediately
drawn in, filled with an incredible delight.

Perfect example of fine writing.

My rating ------ 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 4 Months Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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