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Take my Hand, Walk with Me


A Poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)
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A co write By Debra Edwards and Chris Riley
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This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

Take My Hand walk with me ( A co write with Chris )

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Lets walk and talk and maybe we will see
The potential is there between you and me,
As I look in your eyes I can see your doubt,
You are so special and caring I just want to shout.

To walk with you would be my delight
To talk with you into the night
My doubts will fade when I kiss you
Now it's up to you what we do.


After that first kiss is shared
I think we both know how much we care
As flames of fire start to burn
Doubt and reason are lost in turn


We come together eager to explore
To discover in each other something more
For you I have an overpowering thirst
This time will be like the very first

Your touch is like liquid fire
sparking in me a raging desire
Drink of me and fill your thirst
we move together as if rehearsed

Such ecstacy in the taste of you
We head towards pleasures new
I am filled with the power of your scent
Our passions now we vent


As pleasure scorches at your touch
I seem to explode with you giving so much
As I seek you out with a knowing smile
Your mind and body I just might defile

We discover new meanings to pleasure
As I seek out your hidden treasure
All of our defenses at last are breached
As the climax of our passion is reached

Then as we lay in love’s warm embrace
I gently memorize the lines of your face
Your eyes hold questions until I smile
Then you seem content to relax a while…

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Chris Bold  Debra not


 


© 2009 Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)



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Beautifully passionate.. very fiery and intense. The rhythm, rhyme and flow was incredible here. A story of two lover's coming together with a very fierce yearning and hunger! Oh .. I'd love to read more like this.. hyptnotizing.. I read it 4 times over! Loved the lines:

We come together eager to explore
To discover in each other something more
For you I have an overpowering thirst
This time will be like the very first

Your touch is like liquid fire
sparking in me a raging desire
Drink of me and fill your thirst
we move together as if rehearsed

Keep it up.. great inspirational passion and makes me hunger for more!!! =)

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.





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