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Sweet Surrender ( erotic )


A Poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)

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This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

 

 

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Your kiss so warm and tender

Brings a rush of desire into my veins

As fire erupts deep within my soul

Passions flames I can’t deny

I succumb to this

Sweet surrender

Oh my Love

I sigh

umm

The thrill of you

Touching my skin

The way your passion locks me in

Oh these sweet feeling you engender

Makes me crave this sweet surrender

As our lips move in more demanding ways

To elicit so much pleasure and then to deny

We heighten the pleasure until denials like pain

Now we travel to heaven then hell and back again

 Now here we are teetering out here on this fiery ledge

You finally delve yourself into my sweetest treasure

Filling me full with your unspeakable pleasure

Moaning and then writhing clinging together

Now our explosive desire releases the burn

We both fall into our climacteric return

We collapse from this sweet surrender

Sharing a kiss so warm and tender

              

 


© 2009 Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)



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You have captured the essence of making love tremendously with your writing. The only thing I can think of to help the flow of your writing is, instead of using the word "umm" I would use "mmm". Thats a personal opinion but I think I would be a better fit in this situation. This is one of my favourite poems and I really look forward to reading all the rest of your work!

Posted 3 Months Ago

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