Our Love

Our Love

A Poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)

Our Love


A poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby) Http://www.myspace.com/green_eyez1of6

 

 



Where do I start this story of a love so strong and true?
how can words express this love I'll always share with you.

 

 I knew this was something special from the moment our eyes met,

and maybe it's something more that other people may not get.

 

We had a whirlwind romance and married in just three weeks.

When things were good they were so good it made my knees go weak.


We both had lots of issues, things we needed to work out.

In the middle of doing this we would fight and scream and shout.

 

It took us 14 years but we finally figured out this wasn't the thing to do.

So then it was decided and We all said goodbye to you.

 

We each went our seperate ways. with sorrow in our heart.

You see living together was harder, then it was living apart.


You see there was a problem about these children that we had.

I would not tell them no when they ask to see their Dad.

 

Although we knew it would not work the fire would ignite again.
There is no way to stop it, but no way that we can win.

 

We are both in love with each other and we will be til the end.

I wish that it was different, or that we could be friends.


I wish you all the best, and each day I pray for you.

I'm sorry for physical things that you have been going through.

 

I hope it all works itself out right.

So you get back to being you, with God's help you might.

 

Well you take care and remember that our love is holding true,

And If you ever need me I'll do my best for you.


© 2007 Debra Stevens Edwards (debby) Http://www.myspace.com/green_eyez1of6

 

 

A Poem by Debra Stevens Edwards (debby) Http://www..
Genre- Family Saga

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)


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Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)
Family Saga

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I agree I've learned so much from my relationships and I'm still learning. This is a well written piece surrounded by truth

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Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)
Debra Stevens Edwards (debby)

Long Beach, CA



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I am a single parent of six daughters. I write as a release of emotions I'm feeling. At times I write to entertain my girls or just because I have something to say. My goal is to publish a book of .. more..

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