Puzzle

Sweet poem about love.

Our love is a puzzle

People broke us apart

And lost some of our pieces.

 

Our love is a puzzle

The world has judged us

And forced us to lose each other.

 

My love for you is a puzzle

We may be unconnected

But we were always meant to be

Together.

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading:)

Reviews

[Mariel]

First of all, thanks for the review. It was my very first one, and I was just dying to get one. I like this poem, even though I prefer rhyming poems over non-rhyming. Still, the point of this poem is great, and it's short and sweet. Keep up the great work!

Whoa deep really! Yes love is alot like a puzzle, wonderful metaphor used. I enjoyed this write. Makes one think what they have.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Love is indeed a puzzle it is a part of life it is eternal it is great even at my age I feel love as strongly as a person much much younger than I Accept what love offers for it is well worth the price!

[Miss Anna]

Wow, I really like this. I can relate to it with someone from my history, and I love the puzzle metaphor you applied to the situation. Great work!

[Sujash I. Purna]

Unique viewpoint of a very well-known subject. It is awesome in my opinion. Keep it up!