Bittersweet Dream

the Bard said it all "to sleep, perchance to dream"

Dawn breaches the horizon in a whisper as I awaken to  a pain I cannot bear.

I struggle with the edges of sleep , hoping that it will drag me back into the

comforting arms of Morpheus, where I can be  lulled into a reality of my own making.

 

Please let me slumber until Morte’s  finale sweet release can  keep me in

an eternal state of oblivion for I cannot face a life, a day, a moment where you

Are not mine.

 

Dreamscape world where I sit upon Dante’s second terrace dipping my toes

In the river of fire that fuels my gluttonous love, where I consume you with

a hunger that cannot exist in any dimension of reality other than that of my imagination.

 

Theta’s blue waves wash over my deepest consciousness where images of you blur

as I reach for you across the universe of where I lay  and where you do not

I curl up in the sheets and wait till the day darkens to night and you are here in my arms forever.

Author's Note

go ahead- shred it if you want- it's all constructive to me- since I'm still learning to write I want the feed back

Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Dreamscape world where I sit upon Dante’s second terrace dipping my toes

In the river of fire that fuels my gluttonous love, where I consume you with

a love that cannot exist in any dimension of reality where tranquility exists.


..................Your writings are having appropriate wordings and very much attractive to read. Keep it up. Good write. With regards.

[DaturaBlossoms]

Ooh, I like this.

[wicker]

not bad. i think i'm ignorant to some of the references, but it sounds good. it's still understandable even if not in every detail. keep it up. good voice.

[Laura Maidah]

I will shred. Thanks for the read, but it's very generic. I can't get too excited about any of your prosody.