Snap.

Snap.

A Poem by Deep_Stoat
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It's just a rhyme

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SNAP!!!

While I was having a nap,
somebody closed up the gap.
So I'm stuck in the middle
of this horrible riddle.
I do hope it isn't a trap.

© 2012 Deep_Stoat


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A clever write...Splendid...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great work? Well döne! PEN ON..
If u have time then please read mine Time and Manner.. U can Add me also on fb

Posted 10 Years Ago


ha ha this is full of sarcasm.

And the SNap of it. Being disturbed during a blissful nap...it would make me bitter too. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


You are a clever writer.

It just so happens that your cute rhymes turn
out some deep philosophy .
There`s a lot of livin in your writ`n.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


It sounds like an outlet to a real problem when you were having a nap.
Enjoyed reading.
Rhyming is awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That's a right way to coverts the reality into poetric words'...i loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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very simple but very nicely penned. i liked the rhyming in nap, gap. trap and middle, riddle..it is funny at the same time..

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this rhyme, it is very clever. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Deep_Stoat
Deep_Stoat

Swansea, Rural, United Kingdom



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