Eyes in the Past, Hearts in the Present
A Book by DeesseDuFeu
 What starts as a seemingly simple love triangle evolves into something much deeper, and perhaps darker too. He is a strong and handsome man who, by the age of thirty, already has an impressive collect  © 2017 DeesseDuFeu
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This is my first attempt ever at writing and I'm going for a sort of psychological novel, with major emphasis on what the characters are thinking and feeling. I'm trying to build them out of their thoughts and actions. Since this is all so new for me, I appreciate all feedback.
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I enjoyed what I have read so far. I was a little confused for a while as to who was who. Once you got to know the characters you could figure it out , but at the start it was not clear. I appreciate that adds a bit to the mystery and suspense, but I think many readers like to know whose POV is being narrated. Particularly when they are interspersed with flashbacks. But apart from that the churning emotions and suspense are good and there is clearly lots of potential for emotional and physical drama in this triangle.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Years Ago
Thank you. I understand how it can get confusing, at first, with the two characters that have no nam.. read moreThank you. I understand how it can get confusing, at first, with the two characters that have no name for the first five chapters. However, the reason I only reveal their names in chapter 6 is because I want readers to be wondering and to be curious and to read further in the hope that the mystery will be, eventually, revealed :)
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I enjoyed what I have read so far. I was a little confused for a while as to who was who. Once you got to know the characters you could figure it out , but at the start it was not clear. I appreciate that adds a bit to the mystery and suspense, but I think many readers like to know whose POV is being narrated. Particularly when they are interspersed with flashbacks. But apart from that the churning emotions and suspense are good and there is clearly lots of potential for emotional and physical drama in this triangle.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Years Ago
Thank you. I understand how it can get confusing, at first, with the two characters that have no nam.. read moreThank you. I understand how it can get confusing, at first, with the two characters that have no name for the first five chapters. However, the reason I only reveal their names in chapter 6 is because I want readers to be wondering and to be curious and to read further in the hope that the mystery will be, eventually, revealed :)
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Added on January 29, 2017
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DeesseDuFeuEurope, Belgium
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