Cold

This is what I would call fluff writing: just a thought that pops in my head without much more thought given to it.

It tastes like winter, but all I see is a broken reflection.

Author's Note

Thoughts? Anyone? Title: "Cold" or "Empty"?

Acknowledgement: Broken Perception by oO-Rein-Oo on Deviant Art

Reviews

[Archia]

I'm not entirely sure that I understand this right, I what it is that's like winter. There still though is something nice about, the tone of it, that's what nice, and it really does come across even though it's a short piece.

[DeliriousCerises]

I'm not sure I entirely remember what "it" was, but I think it was hopelessness, or depression. It's cold, lonely, quiet in a psuedo-peaceful way, like winter. But when you're hopeless, you don't really see anything right, you see bits and pieces of the world, and yourself, not really the whole picture, just the imperfections.