Hamburgers up There

Wanted to see if I could write about clouds

Hamburger in the sky
Why do you taunt me
With your delicious allusions
And in the blink of an eye

You're gone.
A face.
A goat.
Hello -- so long

Mr. Goat in the sky
You've melted away
To the vast empty space

As soon as I said hi
I was saying goodbye

Author's Note

Thoughts are very much appreciated. And I did mean allusions, not illusions.

Acknowledgement: Picture "Clouds" by catorb from Deviantart

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

There's a kind of delicious (pun intended) emotion associated with this poem. This can be talking about many things. Are you referring to clouds? Are you referring to the vast expanse of the sky? Are you referring to our ever active galaxy? Or are you referring to inner space? The ability of this poem to make one think along such tangents using such simple words is really astounding. Great job yet again!

[Whales]

Laughing about how cute this is. (ion a good way I love this poem.) I don't mean to brag, but as a professional cloud watcher, this makes me filled with joy.

[JohnnyMagrinho]

F*****g love this. Really, really awesome. Just different and without any real thought on my behalf I've inferred little meaning from it.

My favourite of yours thus far, I think. This is a great example of poetry I think.

[MoriartyMesa]

I may be as wrong as a group of long tailed cats in a room full of rocking chairs, but I found this funny and something that a WW2 pilot might be thinking flying over Germany.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Made me smile, but would horrify me in reality......! Ciao

[Michael X]

to capture the casual passing of time, this brings me to the height of 60s',
a tie dyed perception, where the abstract is possible, to me, this poem
represents the birth of an idea, how clouds inspire illusion then wonder,
clever, soft thoughts with a sense of innocence, brilliantly done ^_^