Big Boy Toys

Objectification

A used forgotten Toy
Left on the ground
Once brought fleeting joy

Old Broken Toys
Can be replaced
Bringing new joys
When new Toys are found

A worn and obedient wind-up doll
Not making a sound

Oh yeah, that's a girl on the ground

Author's Note

It's a pity when people treat others like objects, and when those objectified people begin to believe that they are just objects. Please review honestly, thank you ^^

Photo Credit: "Broken Marionette" by Mikomi Sama on DeviantArt

Reviews

[JohnnyMagrinho]

Deceptively better than first glance would say it is.

That line "When new toys are found" is cleverly placed at the end, but may I ask, why did you capitalise toys?

And the blunt end line was a nice touch.

[DeliriousCerises]

I know I answered your question in a message before commenting was possible, but I just wanted to answer it here in case others were curious. Toys are capitalized because they are a classification for people. Like a name, or nationality. They are Toys. And I also wanted to give it more emphasis. So you get the idea that contrary to how it's being treated in this poem, the "Toy" is important.