Dreaming

Dreaming

A Poem by Summer D.
"

You were beautiful.

"
Dreaming

You were beautiful.
I reached for you, only to see"
You implode within. 

© 2012 Summer D.



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Summer D.
You were so close.


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this makes me so sad. It reminds me of a friend who I loved who destroys himself day by day and I can't do anything to help.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beuatifully written, I could feel the emotions dashed hope conveyed through these three lines. What a lovely title...it makes me think of someone dreaming about a dead/distant lover/friend/relative/person-of-importance, then waking into the reality that one of the aforementioned is no longer with him/her. : (

effervescence/100

Is this supposed to be a haiku? If so, the middle line has one extra syllable...if not, then just ignore this. : )

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Summer D.

Deep Within My Thoughts, CA



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