Love is you

Time and toil might break me down

Till mind and muscles become unwound.

Might find my end beneath the ground

But until then, my heart will pound

For you.

Your love is in my veins,

Crimson that can't be drained.

The yearning will never wane.

I could not sustain the pain

Without you.

My love grows only with thine.

Planted with yours, the roots now entwined.

It blossoms with yours, till fruit on the vine

That tastes ever sweet and beauty divine.

A love that's envied.

A love that's loved.

A love that's timeless

Ever ours because

It's you.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Such a beautiful poem.
So romantic and sweet, an amazing brilliant, rhyme scheme to go with it.
I don't know what else to say other than i loved this poem!

One of the best poems i have read in awhile, can tell just from this poem, that you are quite talented.

Keep writing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was good to see your poetry on the board.
"My love grows only with thine.
Planted with yours, the roots now entwined.
It blossoms with yours, till fruit on the vine
That tastes ever sweet and beauty divine."
I enjoyed the complete poem and the above lines. Solid and beautiful. Thank you Dennis for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dennis Shanaberg]

Just overcoming a year's worth of writer's block.
Missed your reviews, Coyote.
Thanks for the read.
I've got a few other new ones I'd love to hear your thoughts on...

[Coyote Poetry]

I have read a few and I will some more now. Good to be able to read your work.