Lover's Misshap

Lover's Misshap

A Poem by Mr Dennis Paquin

She waits,
lying supine upon satin sheets,
body glistening with scented oils.

The scent of her mingles
with the perfumed breeze
from the open window beside her.

I, well oiled too,
enter the bedroom,
gazing with passion rising
upon her well curved nakidness.

I watch her seductive smile
as she looks at me standing there
with no more than a towel

And give her a little show
of rippling muscles
smiling alluringly.

Then,
laughing excitedly,
I run to jump on the bed
and there
satisfy
some well anticipated
carnal desires.

The towel,
somewhere in the air,
disapears,
as she,
with fained shreek,
Rolls over sensually
to receive me

Landing upon her
my eyes snap open
in wide eyed 
shocking realization

As I,
sliding quickly
across her lovely,
well oiled,
beautiful body

Continue...

straight out

the open window.
 

© 2008 Mr Dennis Paquin


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I love it, I laughed out loud with this, and got a few weird looks from the kids and hubby. But the end is just so funny, more so because it is something that would happen to me. Lovely. Perhaps a little less oil next time. XX

Posted 16 Years Ago


Maybe next time you won't use soo much oil!!! LOL Still laughing at the thought of you flying out the window :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Mr Dennis Paquin
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Dennis, a Vietnam Vet and product of a turbulent past, has a passion for writing poetry as broad as life, love, fantasy, child abuse and the indifferences of man. The uniqueness of his work comes from.. more..

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