In a strange world

A strange world sees me stuck with the blind fold.

The paleness of the midst out here
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visibility so void like of damped screen
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but i have to find my way through........
a strike through with the big break through.........
am in this strange place
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i can't even notice my face
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a place where darkness prevail
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a full dark phase of this our age
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but the moment can't forever lie in state
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so soon i sure will escape
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and see the face of a new age
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a world not at all strange
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where brightness will forever prevail
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and so i will remain rid of this world so strange.

Reviews

[LostinKristina]

This really speaks to your reader, and that's a good thing.
You have great description, the emotion kind of overtakes the words.
If that makes any sense to you at all.
If not I'm sorry.
But I guess it also just depends on how the reader reads it.
This is really great work.

[Tears Forgotten]

good descriptive views of time and place.. the mood is a mixture that is stronger than the words written... good