Deeper than the abyss

Deeper than the abyss

A Poem by Abd-afeez
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Caution! Don't go too deep. It can be dangerous.

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Why oh why! Will this life depict the least we predict.
And the normal sensible nature turn silly.
Caught in this deep pit, oh silly! Forever there in you will exist.
A sunken spot forever ending.
A lenghty hollow with no end at all.
An implossion into the space within.
You are stuck, forever floating in the cursed space.
Woe! No way to get to lay low.
And the stars laughter, a great pointer, to your approaching disaster.

The real thing! A step away from the entangled confusion.
A wipe on the fogged screen,
An aim to get things clearer.
All this while, implied! Is the fact, that you could get stuck in the web of life.
An aggravated one that see you deeply immersed.
So deep, deeper than an abyss.
And the helping hand of solution,
So out of reach in this your deep thing.

A pity spreading, like a mist below a cloud sheet.
And the follow up, togetherness! That get you messed up.
We see this life, damped! And not so plain in every plane.
Over the wide plains, we see our ways fading away with no stopper to parade.
But the ways of the folks of the archaic, historic yet so lame.
And technology come be our; save the world theme, always displayed.
But we are just deeply tricked,
Deep! Deeper than an abyss.
And we think we are advancing.

And the magical sways that reigns in those days.
And through the rains the wands still stayed in their place.
And the wizards! Starting to own a career, a disaster! Not so clear to their freaky eyes.
And the witches roam the streets with their spell discoveries.
And the danger uprisen was starting to get to the brim.
And they go deep! Deeper than an abyss.
But so to speak! It all ended in a darkness frenzy.

Space! Once a dismay we were ready to change. And we built rocket to pocket space, and be a covered place.
But beyond are those strange, alien faces, a trick commited to out grow human existence.
And when the invade in their swarms of myriad selves.
They will go deep! Deeper than an abyss.
To wipe human of the earth surface.

© 2010 Abd-afeez



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You journey us into the dark edges of that abyss with your words.. that which is external, and the darkness within... Passionate and powerful, here is a warning to be heeded for certain.

Posted 6 Years Ago


There is so much to this poem! A fantastic write!
I am astounded by this! So mmuch in life we never think about, never dwell on! So much taken for granted and always pushed under the rug!
We rarely think or deal with issues! The infinite possibilities out there!
Excellent poem love!
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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As I read and re-read this I find layers of depth to it. Too often mankind forgets to weigh the consequences of its actions as it seeks to learn and grow beyond its present knowledge. We need to be mindful of our environment, and ask ourselves, "If I do this, how will it effect others? nature? and is it truly worth the risks we take?" Knowledge in itself is not an enemy but should be persued and tempered with wisdom, such as you have written here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A outstanding poem. Man desire to destroy everything that is beautiful is coming true. Your poem speak of true things that should scare the hell out of us. Thank you for the poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


A real quest for simplicity? How man is venturing into dark, unknown territory without knowing what the result will be?

Your complex mesh of words has so many layers .. will return to read and re-read but, in the meantime .. I congratulate you for such a thought-provoking piece of writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Abd-afeez
Abd-afeez

Ibadan, Nigeria



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Am just so creative and prolific. Am from south western nigeria. And am currently studying biochemistry. i really love the science world. Here you see a piece of ink on paper and on it you see result .. more..

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