Like True Love's First Kiss (6.29.11)

Just about a moment in time.

            I feared that I would never again be able to embrace you, I was scared that soon you’d leave me to melt away, I was terrified that my heart would never feel love again. But, you once more took on the challenge of being together and I almost cried happy tears as I read your 2 A.M. text messages. Then, the next day, I crawled into your bed, under your covers, right up next to you, my heart louder than an air horn, faster than a cheetah, more nervous than a girl on her first date, and just laid with you feeling your amazing body against mine, our breathing in sync, our eyes shut tight, a smile on my face. It was such a perfect moment on a Monday morning that I wished it would never end, that a picture was taken, that time would freeze. And, even though I was nervous, I noticed that my feelings, my love, my admiration for you still had not changed, that you’re the only one that can make my stomach so weak, the only one that can make me smile when I’m blue, the only one I could ever love, that laying next to you felt so right, so amazing, like the first day of summer, the first time driving a car, true love’s first kiss<3

Reviews

[The Doctor]

very sweet and true. Writing from the heart is what makes a great writer and I think this is a good start.