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Love Has Gone

Love Has Gone

A Poem by Lilia

Why did you leave me?
Why did you pretend to care?
Why did I think it would work?
Why did I dare?

Now love, you've left me
Left me all alone
I sit and say my silent prayer
A prayer that wants you home.

I wheeze and cry into the night
My beloved is not there
To comfort me as he once did
Why have you gone nowhere?

Yes, you're nowhere
For my heart calls for you
But no answer is returned
Your love has faded where it once was for me
And now my heart still burns.



© 2017 Lilia



Author's Note

Lilia
My boyfriend just broke up with me... so here is this.

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I'm sorry for your loss, hun, but kudos to you for taking your agony to paper. I wish you the very best and know you can pull through this. One day, you'll see it was for the best as someone better comes along and heals up your heart. Beautiful poetry. Well done. Keep up the good work

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much!



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Aw I'm sorry. It made for a pretty good poem though. I like "you're nowhere" quite a bit.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your poem. I am sorry about your breakup . I am sure you will be ok and pull through.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I am sorry for your loss. Your words had me close to tears.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it
I'm sorry for your loss, hun, but kudos to you for taking your agony to paper. I wish you the very best and know you can pull through this. One day, you'll see it was for the best as someone better comes along and heals up your heart. Beautiful poetry. Well done. Keep up the good work

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much!

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Lilia
Lilia

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