Promises

Promises

A Poem by Lilia

I'm told not to die,
not to hurt myself.
To feel better,
to look for someone else.

But alas, my heart cannot go on,
for I promised my heart to you.
Remember? Before you wanted to move on?
A promise I can't keep, but the one I hold true,
is the one that gave my heart forever to you.

Why do I do this?
Must I really put my soul into everything?
Did you really deserve my heart,
or did you have it on a string?
Will my heart go on,
as the song tells me so,
or is that just another promise,
that was only made to be broke?

© 2017 Lilia



Author's Note

Lilia
Um... sorry these make no sense, I'm just trying to get the emotions out and I'm currently crying sooo yea. Please review.

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Growing up is hell. I'm really glad I'm through it (centuries ago ).
I think writing out your thoughts is good therapy. It doesn't have to make sense to anybody but you.
Personally I thought it quite good. Reminded me when I went through those stages of life too.
I thought I would never survive, but here I am, an old man of 68... 68! now that's depressing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Growing up is hell. I'm really glad I'm through it (centuries ago ).
I think writing out your thoughts is good therapy. It doesn't have to make sense to anybody but you.
Personally I thought it quite good. Reminded me when I went through those stages of life too.
I thought I would never survive, but here I am, an old man of 68... 68! now that's depressing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very tender words and emotions.
keep writing and you'll free yourself of these torments.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this poem. I have many poems above broken promises.
"Will my heart go on,
as the song tells me so,
or is that just another promise,
that was only made to be broke?"
I understand the above lines. In time, after a heart break. We are wiser. Not braver in new attempts. Thank you Lilia for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it.
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I like this one to the core...

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

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Lilia
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