My Life in 6 Words

My Life in 6 Words

A Poem by Desert Knave
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Day 2 of National Poetry Month 2017

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Still a bit

depressed ...


I guess.


© 2017 Desert Knave



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Desert Knave
Written for a contest.

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Depressed and liberated through words. You gave it flight.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to tell how we really feel sometimes. You pack a lot of meaning into just a few words, Jim. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Desert Knave

6 Months Ago

Thank you !
i like how the "i guess' is spaced....
it leaves that moment or two of hesitation...almost could have gone the other way.
j..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Yes, it needed a moment of hesitation to work for me. ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-50's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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