First Flight
A Poem by
Desert Dreamer
Poetry inspired by the photo of a butterfly.
© 2011 Desert Dreamer
Author's Note
Background image by PoppySilver.
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I read about butterflies all the time, the subject of many poems.
Now I have read one that has done poetic justice to this marvel .
Not to put down others, just think warming wings in morning sun
made all the difference. Gold dust is too, magic,
Sending children into flight is always in mind- love your work,
Rossen
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Such a wonderful message in this delightful little poem... when ever we take a chance how can you not wonder how others will react or effect them.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Such a wonderful message in this delightful little poem... when ever we take a chance how can you not wonder how others will react or effect them.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This poem reads like a morning hour launch pad-- leaving the flight or the day up to the reader to create. Incredible impact!
Posted 2 Years Ago
This poem reads like a morning hour launch pad-- leaving the flight or the day up to the reader to create. Incredible impact!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
poetry inspired by metamorphosis
Posted 2 Years Ago
poetry inspired by metamorphosis
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I remember this image. Poppy always had some that made you think.
I love your thoughts on this image.
You make the butterfly sound beautiful ( which it is)
and ready to take on the world.
I would love to witness the first flight of a butterfly.
Beautiful thoughts.
Chloe
Posted 2 Years Ago
I remember this image. Poppy always had some that made you think.
I love your thoughts on this image.
You make the butterfly sound beautiful ( which it is)
and ready to take on the world.
I would love to witness the first flight of a butterfly.
Beautiful thoughts.
Chloe
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Simply pretty. The words alone form an image and the photo just adds to the beautiful words. Very pretty.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Simply pretty. The words alone form an image and the photo just adds to the beautiful words. Very pretty.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
looks like a tortoise shell butterfly, do you get the swallowtails in your area ?
Posted 2 Years Ago
looks like a tortoise shell butterfly, do you get the swallowtails in your area ?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh how tasteful and so touching.. Your imagery was perfection!
Mags xx
Posted 2 Years Ago
Oh how tasteful and so touching.. Your imagery was perfection!
Mags xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
oh, I want to witness the flight . . . lovely words and image
Posted 2 Years Ago
oh, I want to witness the flight . . . lovely words and image
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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