Liberation

Liberation

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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Collaboration with Desert Dreamer and PoppySilver

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Her darkness beneath your glow

Her need beneath your light

all will be forgotten

except your magical touch

bring light to darkness

awaken the sleeping senses

 

so they can whisper liberation

upon softness

caress

and all there is, can be placed on the heart

 

close your eyes

two souls converge into one

surrender to the call of the ether

 

This is home

This is home

 

 

 

Copyright Desert Dreamer and PoppySilver 2011


© 2011 Desert Dreamer



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There is a real joy in knowing where comfort is and where arms give more than more; here there's a sort of communion of what we all search for. You've both reached out, felt and written briefly but superbly. Not choosing this or that line as being best .. it's all best.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good to be liberated from darkness and lost. I like story and the desire of the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Two lovely souls blending in whispers of delight and satisfaction... a joy to behold

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it.delicately simple

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So loved this one with you DD, love :) xoxo

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Home is where the heart is... a delightful collab between two excellent writers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and your shared Muse is?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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