Voice of the Raven

Voice of the Raven

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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A moment in my day today

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Image copywrite DesertDreamer

 

 

Overhead flying

Call of the winter ravens

Ancient voices speak

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2012 Desert Dreamer



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nice one


Posted 4 Years Ago


Love this and miss you. xox

Posted 5 Years Ago


True art in every sense and in this i get a great sense of peace my friend perfect in every sense keep posting cheers gonzo

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ravens are.depicted in many ways. I love the photography that goes along with these words

Posted 5 Years Ago


maidahl, this is a haiku, it is a simple formatted view of nature that can also be interpretted with a symbolic meaning. I'm not going to give any more details, the best haiku need to be pondered in order to find their meaning, the questions you ask are best answered by you.

I'm not saying this is a "best" haiku, only that my poem is not "acting like a poem", it is one. Please look up the definition of haiku if you need to know more. Thanks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


What are the ancient voices? Are they disembodied? I feel like this is acting like a poem without actually being one.

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Commendable work. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful Haiku.....Whisk

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2011
Last Updated on May 6, 2012
Tags: raven, sky

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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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