Poppy Folds

Poppy Folds

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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inner sunshine

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Single gold Poppy

closing because of the clouds

where is the sunshine?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2012 Desert Dreamer



Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
Photo taken last week, Spring is here!

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Great description of the Poppy. Nature give us surprise gift for the wise in vision. Thank you for the photo and the poem.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


ah, this is nice...a haiku that if read between the lines could be a senyru for someone whose life is dark and painful...that person hasn't felt the sun in so long.

and is tired of being single, but is afraid to open up again...the risk feels too high.

Posted 3 Months Ago


My favorite flower, love this one! Great photo too.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Indicates the necessity of sunshine for beauty of flower and thus for the whole living entity.
Amazing write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


I like the words that go along with this photo

Posted 11 Months Ago


maidahl, yes, it is a flower and I see a whole universe in every flower. Flowers are amazing beings that teach lessons if we take a moment to listen. This specific golden poppy taught me an important concept about human beings and relationships. I give thanks to the flowers for sharing their wisdom.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I favor haikus because they don't strain the attention span. This one taxed me. The picture is distracting. As a poem, this is hard to get worked up over, you know? It's a flower.

Posted 11 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the poppy identity...



Posted 1 Year Ago


you live in blessedness, how nice

Posted 1 Year Ago


I absolutely love poppies... their strength and paper-thin fragility mingle in such a colorful mystery... and here you speak of their words voiced in a silent dance... Wondrous...

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on February 22, 2012
Last Updated on June 26, 2012
Tags: poppy, spring, flower, sunshine, relationship

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Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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