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A Poem by Moonflower


Crisp air, tingled.
Bent me forward, toward
eyes that sang
with blood rimmed in a raucous flood
of undisguised emotion,
flicker and stare, don't hold me
there where the wind has
blown before. I just don't know you,
can't control what's true,
with all these feelings in the dark


© 2013 Moonflower



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very little of what most writers do actually makes me stay and read from start to finish. i read this start to finish about three times. this is for me an insanely enjoyable read.
"with blood rimmed in a raucous flood of undisguised emotion"
amazing amazing work. i'm gonna grant you a three dollar raise, you've earned it.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonflower

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your admiration and faithful readership ;) I enjoy your comments and reviews. .. read more
alan khan

3 Years Ago

yeah still kickin around on here. check in a few times a day. i hope your writers block fades away s.. read more



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Your words build such a beautiful fire of emotions... this setting coming alive in the perfect tensions of longing... of wishing.... and yet of realizing that it's hard to grasp the truth in the darkness... Powerfully voiced... Hope all is well in your world... you're missed here in this one...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Is it me? Or do i sense a touch of eroticism in the air? Crisp...concise...and for me.
.a dip in a sensuality one need not clearly see to feel...lovely lovely Desiree im back and i hope to see you forward front centre and inspirational in the very near...almost NOW like future x

Posted 2 Years Ago


very little of what most writers do actually makes me stay and read from start to finish. i read this start to finish about three times. this is for me an insanely enjoyable read.
"with blood rimmed in a raucous flood of undisguised emotion"
amazing amazing work. i'm gonna grant you a three dollar raise, you've earned it.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonflower

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your admiration and faithful readership ;) I enjoy your comments and reviews. .. read more
alan khan

3 Years Ago

yeah still kickin around on here. check in a few times a day. i hope your writers block fades away s.. read more
ahhh...like a drink of fresh cool water your writing is. Simple, clearly worded and with an aesthetic sensibility that is endearing. The last line takes all the others and pulls them into a tight corset of thought that captures the reader about the mental waste.

You write very well!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reading, this is the first thing I've posted in sooo long. It's nice to hear from.. read more
Rikkevi Rue

4 Years Ago

and it is my pleasure to read you and see you here. Your skill and the unique of you are missed!
Moonflower

4 Years Ago

you're much too sweet, dear! thank youuuuuu (((((:
This is quite beautiful, going to come back for another read

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moonflower

4 Years Ago

awww thanks dear

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Moonflower
Moonflower

Louisville, KY



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Hello :) My name is Desiree. What brings me to this website is my love for poetry and storytelling. At this time I consider myself more of a poet, than a writer or author. I do not have the pa.. more..

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